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Submission Name:
Lonely to Lovely
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Author:
dx10687
ASL Info:
21 / M / IA
Elite Ratio:
2.62 - 13/19/18
Words:
171
Class/Type:
Lyrics/Love
Total Views:
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Description:
A song about me and how i feel with my current gf hilary
Lonely to Lovely
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When we first started talking
I thought you seemed nice
And now that I have met you
I know you are wonderful
I was fine with being alone
Until I met you cuz
Now my heart grows fonder
Every time we are apart
When we first met
I was so nervous but now
Just being with you is
Oh so wonderful because
I was fine with being alone
Until I met you cuz
Now my heart grows fonder
Every time we are apart
I love being around you
Because I can completely act
Like myself and I know that
You are fine with it
I was fine with being alone
Until I met you cuz
Now my heart grows fonder
Every time we are apart
The way I feel inside
Is so unexplainable
But I know you feel
Exactly the same way
I was fine with being alone
Until I met you cuz
Now my heart grows fonder
Every time we are apart
Submitted on 2007-02-03 01:49:57
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I felt where u were tryin to go with the piece. I think that the repitition took away from it. Maybe once in the beginning a nd once in the end and fill in the other stanzas with more. Good concept.
| Posted on 2007-02-11 00:00:00 | by
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