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    dots Submission Name: Sydneydots
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    Author: LadyMerlina
    ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60/93/58
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSydneydots
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    Far across the globe,
    In a world
    both strange and beautiful.

    I hear you, like you're near me.
    Smiling, laughing.
    Being happy.

    I hope your sky is blue.
    I hope the ocean is too.
    I hope the sun kisses you
    As you embrace the day.
    Like old friends that think of you,
    Far and away.

    Enjoy the peace, child.
    Live it up.
    Don't worry your mind with us.




    Submitted on 2007-02-03 10:35:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      welcome another canadian to the site
    i am from torontoi dont see to many canadian writers on the site and i am glad there are a few

    your post was very meaningful as your words make me think of my children wherever they may be

    sandman
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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