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Submission Name: Sydney dots

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Author:	LadyMerlina
ASL Info:	24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:	3.07 - 60/93/58
Words:	73

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Sydney

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Far across the globe,
In a world
both strange and beautiful.

I hear you, like you're near me.
Smiling, laughing.
Being happy.

I hope your sky is blue.
I hope the ocean is too.
I hope the sun kisses you
As you embrace the day.
Like old friends that think of you,
Far and away.

Enjoy the peace, child.
Live it up.
Don't worry your mind with us.

Submitted on 2007-02-03 10:35:29 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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welcome another canadian to the site
i am from torontoi dont see to many canadian writers on the site and i am glad there are a few

your post was very meaningful as your words make me think of my children wherever they may be

sandman
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