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    dots Submission Name: Burning Candledots
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    Author: Raindrops
    ASL Info:    23/f/Pennsylvania
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 184/213/287
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 224
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Written on February 3, 2007. For Isaac.


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    dotsBurning Candledots
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    My heart sings out to you
    A love that's always true
    you're not around and my heart breaks
    until the day I see your face

    I need you here
    with me now
    I don't know how
    to live...

    without you here.

    Does your heart hear?
    Is it in touch?
    Can it feel
    just how much
    that I love you?

    Wrapped up in your arms
    Waiting for the next time
    I hear your voice
    One breath or one heartbeat
    they all mean so much

    each moment shared
    each spark that flared
    every kiss that's granted
    and our hearts connected..

    every time I see the love in your eyes





    I melt.




    Submitted on 2007-02-03 12:47:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like the "i melt" it was cool. keep up the writing. keep posting. hope to read more later. chill
    tina
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]



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