I really like your style of poetry applied to this writing. To me, this style comes across as in a hazed, be it induced or not, just wandering around feeling an area. I like that alot. Some people try to use a simular style with other subjects but it doesn't always pull off well, this one does.
"O' wonderous starkness
Devoid of all color"
love that part~so true, when the snow hits us, every color is muted by the covering of white~very nice write (and yes aaron is right, intriguing is with a "g") love poems inspired by the whims of nature~keep it up!! ttyl hun :)