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    dots Submission Name: Frozen Beautydots

    Author: Lil gal
    ASL Info:    32/F-ya/here
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 355/216/36
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 943
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       I was inspired on my way to work while it was snowing.

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    dotsFrozen Beautydots

    Eerie beauty possesses

    Captivating spellbound eyes

    Luring into the frozen life

    A trance that's endless

    Seeing with newfound eyes

    O' wonderous starkness

    Devoid of all color

    The silent haunting of the ghostly winter blanket

    Kiss of Death

    bringing forth the masterpiece that is nature.

    Submitted on 2007-02-03 12:47:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really liked this one! It had a cold feel to it and it made a chill run down my spine. Love the way you write.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      I Dont Know What To Say
    This Is Beautiful
    I Really Love The Line Captivating Spellbound Eyes
    Keep Up Your Great Work
    Love Stacey
    | Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand you are getting your fair share of this snow in your neck of the woods!

    You know me, I love nature and the connections of the seasons and the dramatic way the snow inspires - it's so quiet and hauntingly beautiful - just like this piece!

    Happy Day girl!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share
    | Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      oooh! I really like this! great job! :)
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like your style of poetry applied to this writing. To me, this style comes across as in a hazed, be it induced or not, just wandering around feeling an area. I like that alot. Some people try to use a simular style with other subjects but it doesn't always pull off well, this one does.
    | Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ]
      hey great pic this was a great piece of imagery
    i think it really leaves the reader wanting more
    great read and write and you leave the reader with a good visual picture

    | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      "O' wonderous starkness
    Devoid of all color"
    love that part~so true, when the snow hits us, every color is muted by the covering of white~very nice write (and yes aaron is right, intriguing is with a "g") love poems inspired by the whims of nature~keep it up!! ttyl hun :)
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]

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