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    dots Submission Name: my curedots

    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 539
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 562

       once again i have gotten back to to sopngwriting. not the greatest and still unfinished. i like it though. not as good as the one i have yet to post though.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsmy curedots

    how is it i'm so in love with you
    how is it that our love is so true
    a miracle beyond reality
    a never ending magick fantasy
    i know when i look into your eyes
    i see a love that cannot be diguised
    a memory that i will never trade
    a love that i know will not fade

    i know that when i'm with you
    our love is pure
    a day when you are with me
    could be my cure
    and when you are beside me
    my heart beats fast
    i can see that our love
    will always last

    Submitted on 2007-02-03 13:22:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The words in this are pretty powerful, despite the use of a short diction.
    You get straight to the point.
    You should send the lyrics off to a singer, or a band or something.
    I like the rhyming scheme, it gives it that extra bit of a rythm,

    P.s, I don't actually like My Chemical Romance, my Dad bought me the T-Shirt, it was a nice thing for him to do, so I figured I'd wear it =P. lol. Besides I Like the art on the front of it, and that's one of the only pictures that makes me look good. lol.

    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by Roseyness | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi long time this was short and simple and has a nice meaning
    are you going to add to it you could take it onward but it is good as it is

    | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like the rhythm of this.
    I can hear it being sung.
    Very nice job.
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by wovenwords | [ Reply to This ]

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