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    dots Submission Name: The didactic waydots
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    Author: WD
    ASL Info:    44/M/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 7/7/20
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/The pain inside
    Total Views: 198
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 338



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    dotsThe didactic waydots
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    disequilibrium engulfs the disenchanted heart

    forlorn and isolated
    with thoughts of sensationalism

    dawdling the iminent debarkation

    home



    WD




    Submitted on 2007-02-03 15:45:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the way we learn: tension for relief on repeat or we run into the wall, change our course for the topography of infinity. good stuff, i feel related to.
    | Posted on 2007-02-14 00:00:00 | by Myopic | [ Reply to This ]


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