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    dots Submission Name: Walk the Linedots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1287
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 956



    Description:
       Me and DJ and are back together, and we are great, but we still have to work at it(juss like any relationship) Please give you true opinion.

    This one is for you DJ.
    I LOVE YOU ALWAYS


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    dotsWalk the Linedots
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    Im walking.....
    I'm tired....
    But it makes me stronger,
    For my baby,
    Without him, my life would be no longer.

    Im doing this for him.

    I'm trying so hard,
    That I am in pain,
    But I know with all this,
    I'll have so much to gain.

    I'm in Love.
    What else can I say.
    I'll do anything for him,
    I KNOW im here to stay.

    I know he Loves me,
    And I know I did him wrong,
    But he also knows im sorry,
    And I've even proved it in song.

    Even though everything is better now,
    And I will say this one more time,

    I Love him so much,
    And I will forever WALK THE LINE.




    "Because your mine I'll walk the line "
    *Johnny Cash*




    Submitted on 2007-02-03 19:23:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      mwah! i love you babe even though i was sitting rite beside you when you wrote this it still impresses me and i still love it

    MWAH!!
    by the way i got my guitar back....
    HELL YEAH!
    | Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      Really nice poem, Erika! I'm a fan of Johnny Cash, and it was great of you to acknowlege his song.
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This kicks ass i've read a lot of writings and i'd have to say that this is one of my favorites its damn good keep it up
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by Metalman | [ Reply to This ]


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