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The Way


Author: Metalman
ASL Info:    18/M/TX
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Words: 211
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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The Way




The way



Where do you go when there’s no one around
when you feel like your about to hit the ground
your life’s been flipped turned upside down
and nothing around you stays the same
but the one thing that never changes
“is the way you turn me into something I love
the way you’re all I think of
the way the smile on your face brightens the day
and the way your embrace makes everything fade away”
my life was turned around
I was lost but now I am found
you made me realize what I wanted to be
you brought me back to me
I feel alive
I feel free
“I love the way you turn me into something I love
the way you’re all I think of
the way the smile on you face brightens the day
and the way your embrace makes everything fade away”
you saved my life
I’ve never even thought twice
about turning back
going back to how it was
my life was almost dust
you pulled me from the ashes
you mended the pasts gashes
I don’t know what else to say
except for thanks for everything
I love you you are my everything.




Submitted on 2007-02-03 21:11:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I thought this was really good! It just kindve flowed together. Its very sweet too. Good write!!
| Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by crazy_83 | [ Reply to This ]


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