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    Author: POETRY
    ASL Info:    17/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 259/141/37
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 272
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       This was dedicated to someone who he should know who he is....eric. Im sorry if this will hurt you in any way


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    How could I not realize that you were the one?
    No wait let me rephrase that....
    How could you not realize I was the one?
    I loved you despite of the distance
    I loved you despte of the difference
    You lived far away
    And it was hard not seeing you everyday
    But I thought I would be worth it...
    I understood when you found someone to love over there
    So I didnt question your authority
    Cause it was nither here nor there
    You chose to be with her so I set you free
    Even though it would later effect me.
    I didnt want to be selfish
    So I let you go so you can finally be happy
    because honestly think you werent happy with me.

    Just know that I loved you
    With all of my heart
    I gave my all
    I dont think I can do it again




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      This is so sad, and it tells an unselfish story! It makes me feel sad for you, and yet proud of your strength and determination!
    | Posted on 2008-05-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      A very poignant and terribly bittersweet piece of poetry .... nicely done .... overall effect is good ... bravo .... bravo ... bravo...
    | Posted on 2007-02-16 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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