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Author: POETRY
ASL Info:    17/f/az
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This was dedicated to someone who he should know who he is....eric. Im sorry if this will hurt you in any way


How could I not realize that you were the one?
No wait let me rephrase that....
How could you not realize I was the one?
I loved you despite of the distance
I loved you despte of the difference
You lived far away
And it was hard not seeing you everyday
But I thought I would be worth it...
I understood when you found someone to love over there
So I didnt question your authority
Cause it was nither here nor there
You chose to be with her so I set you free
Even though it would later effect me.
I didnt want to be selfish
So I let you go so you can finally be happy
because honestly think you werent happy with me.

Just know that I loved you
With all of my heart
I gave my all
I dont think I can do it again

Submitted on 2007-02-03 21:28:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is so sad, and it tells an unselfish story! It makes me feel sad for you, and yet proud of your strength and determination!
| Posted on 2008-05-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  A very poignant and terribly bittersweet piece of poetry .... nicely done .... overall effect is good ... bravo .... bravo ... bravo...
| Posted on 2007-02-16 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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