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    dots Submission Name: Winter's Reminiscentdots
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    Author: FarawayFeelings
    ASL Info:    16/F/Mia
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 159/74/72
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWinter's Reminiscentdots
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    When the hot sinful air
    of summer is absent
    memories tread cool territory
    and peak over
    solid walls
    of consciousness.

    And they crawl over
    like pale children
    out to play
    in an expanse
    dotted with wild flowers
    the sun braves a plain
    and cleanly light.




    Submitted on 2007-02-03 23:26:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i dont get your title. please explain.
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]


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