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    dots Submission Name: Help Medots
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    Author: crazy_83
    ASL Info:    28/f/mo
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 27/29/18
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsHelp Medots
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    open my eyes help me see
    am i living a lie
    help me to be free
    my soul is yearning for answers
    my heart is crying out
    please help sooth my soul
    help me find a way out
    take away the pain
    pull the knife from my back
    i dont know what to say
    let alone how to react

    cast away the darkness
    open the door to light
    take away my wrongs lord
    help me make things right
    i see a sinking soul
    struggling to just breath
    put your hand on mine lord
    help me feel at ease




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