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    dots Submission Name: Fantasized Realitydots
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    Author: crazy_83
    ASL Info:    28/f/mo
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 27/29/18
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFantasized Realitydots
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    reading
    thinking
    thoughts of empty fears
    lost in a world of dreams
    shit that you want but never have
    getting nothing
    but what you envy the most and
    losing the shit your soul needed
    from one life to another
    from fucked up person to fucked up person
    an endless circle of a dieing change
    that never happened
    you get nothing but a
    fantasized reality




    Submitted on 2007-02-04 00:56:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      very nice list of clichés, I think you could have listed more but encorporating the mainstream idiocracies like diet fads adds a bit more flavor and personality.
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 00:00:00 | by Liability | [ Reply to This ]


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