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    dots Submission Name: im sorrydots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsim sorrydots
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    looking back in time
    ive realized i never really
    did things right
    i never stoped to think of you
    why couldnt i see
    you were always there for me
    cause im always wraped up in
    things i could win
    you were the antidote
    that got me by
    It felt like you
    knew me better then i knew myself
    Im moody,meesy
    and you never seemed to care
    when i was angry
    you listened
    when i needed advice you gave it
    well now thats over
    and i just want to say
    im sorry for never seeing this
    and for all the lies i kept
    that you should have known

    Deticated to: Chad H.




    Submitted on 2007-02-04 21:27:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Definately has the 'I'm sorry' feeling. XmaryjaneX was right it is deep. Props. Good write.
    | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by Foreseer | [ Reply to This ]
      its deep.
    and if i was mad at you that would definately smoothe things over.
    | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]



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