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    dots Submission Name: when i think of youdots
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    Author: Caity_walsj
    ASL Info:    15/f/aust
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       (made by caitlin walsh aboy a guy called timmy)


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    When I Think of you/eternal soul mates/when dreams come true

    If raindrops fell on my head
    If lightning flashed
    And thunder said,
    This is the hour, what will you do?

    Id close my eyes
    And think of you

    You brighten things up
    Throughout the day
    And when you go to leave
    I say to myself: please stay

    Your on my mind most of the day
    And at night I go to bed and pray
    An angel as lovely as you
    Would make my dreams come true

    Thinking about you alone or in class
    Writing your name on my bathroom window glass
    Wishing you were here
    To love, hold and care
    Wishing I had you with me
    To cherish and to stare

    I read your texts and ims
    Over and over again
    Wishing wed be together
    Until the end

    Thoughts running through my head
    Of us being together in bed
    Sleeping together all night
    Hoping we will never fight

    You know youre the most important to me
    So when I wake I expect to see thee
    But when my dreams dont come true
    I keep myself together
    To see the one and only you

    One day I will be by your side
    To hold your hand
    Right until the end.




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