Melancholic songs filled my heart
Whenever i gazed into your eyes
It struck a tune of faith and hope
As i fall in love with your cries
Your cries for freedom
As shackles bound you
Your cries of struggle
As they beckon to you
I fell for the cries because of its purity
To admit that you are truly in pain.
Is as rare as those songs you sang.
They are songs of joy that stayed in my heart
Songs of heartbreak that tore me apart
I fell in love for your courage,
To face the pain and to share them with me.
Built in a song...
It made me cry a song, too.
Wow, this is good, I liked it. There was that feeling to it that you can't really explain, but it conveyed an emotion and a picture. I really liked how almost all the words fell into place. Props. Nice write.