This is a great write that Im sure you feel better about yourself after writing it
Sometimes we need to put down in words our thoughts and feelings and we are then able to find the answers much more quicker
It is also GREAT to see you posting again its been awhilke since Ive seen your name
How are you doing
You take care of yourself
God Bless
Ron
I can't agree with Joy. I like short and pithy and iffen the piece is called "questions" how much more do you need to give? I'm not so sure of the final line which seems a touch clumsy and ess balanced than the rest.
i think that this has the potential to be an amazing write, but i think under each question you should elaborate more, so it give the reader a sense of what you feel, a deeper sense of the confusion and whatever other emotion that he makes you feel. other then that though i cant say to much about it, and mind you this is just my opinion, keep it up and if you do lengthen it drop me a line so i can check it out...... take care....Joy
Submission Name: *Questions
