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Through it all We rise to fall Falling faster through the dark We so gracefully missed the mark Each time we falter and fail The lives we touch grow frail The light gets dimmer The anger simmers Run screaming through the black Don't ever take it back The mistakes we make now will shape us Where the lives we lead will take us Behind the smiles we secretly fake Nothing restricts the things we will make So let our real light shine Don't be afraid to take what's mine Let the fake smiles become real Voice out loud the pain we feel Throw away our razors Take away the temptation to waver Heal the skin that's been broken Our voice, now, has spoken. |
Hey! I absolutely love this poem. I honestly have no negative comments. Not One!! I've been reading poems on here for a long LONG time and I have never EVER come across someone with as much talent as you!! I mean I would kill to have half the talent you have!! Your poems the reach something real you know? no lovey-dovey crap, no fake stuff it's real. It's how you really feel and people can sense that(I'm just guessing I don't actually know how you feel Lol) But seriously..I am VERY VERY impressed and that doesn't happen often :) Congrats. This ones going in my faves. Kapri | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by kapri49 | [ Reply to This ] | Wow. That's ama-za-zing. I think you've become better, and that's what everyone wants, is to become better. You're a really gifted person and I lob you forever. Lol, most of my favorited poems are yours, cause its hard for me to favorite stuff when I don't know them. | But anyway, like I was saying, I think you've become way betterer at writing. Which isn't saying much 'cause you were great to begin with! ANNYWHO.. About the poem, It's really really really good. I lob it. Cause I remember when we were ohhhh so emo, and now I honestly can't stand labels. We just sort of needed something to call our own, and now you've grown out of it. If you know what I'm trying to say...... I'm not very good with saying stuff..... You know.... Haha anywayyy... ily xoxo-sam | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by xcut_up_angelx | [ Reply to This ] | |