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So Called Stitches


Author: poetic_tragedy
ASL Info:    16/f/USA
Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39 /55 /30
Words: 156
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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So Called Stitches



I couldn't heal these wounds if I tried
So help me now, close up the lacerations with these so called stitches
I need you now to tell me why
'Cause life is a game, it throws the pitches

All this violence, self-inflicted
Rage that runs rampant throught the city
Put these bandages over my heart, vindictive
All I can stand right now is your pity

Tell me it's alright
Lie to my face
'Cause baby, it's the truth I can't take

It was the hatred I felt that gave me heartache to sing
I'm just a sad song you hear day to day
When all I needed was nothing
I still pushed you away

Tell me it's alright
Lie to my face
'Cause baby, it's the truth I can't take

This song I can't sing is a short one to date
I'm sorry to tell you I'm not filled with hate




Submitted on 2007-02-05 18:58:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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