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    dots Submission Name: So Called Stitchesdots
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    Author: poetic_tragedy
    ASL Info:    16/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39/55/30
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsSo Called Stitchesdots
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    I couldn't heal these wounds if I tried
    So help me now, close up the lacerations with these so called stitches
    I need you now to tell me why
    'Cause life is a game, it throws the pitches

    All this violence, self-inflicted
    Rage that runs rampant throught the city
    Put these bandages over my heart, vindictive
    All I can stand right now is your pity

    Tell me it's alright
    Lie to my face
    'Cause baby, it's the truth I can't take

    It was the hatred I felt that gave me heartache to sing
    I'm just a sad song you hear day to day
    When all I needed was nothing
    I still pushed you away

    Tell me it's alright
    Lie to my face
    'Cause baby, it's the truth I can't take

    This song I can't sing is a short one to date
    I'm sorry to tell you I'm not filled with hate




    Submitted on 2007-02-05 18:58:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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