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Grossed yet?

Author: darkwiccan14
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ha ha ha! just bored! lol cheesy joke...get it yet? goddamnit! just keep reading and thinking, cuz then you'll get it soon enuff...

Grossed yet?

SItting in this classroom,
so dark and dead,
I feel like cutting odd my own head,
or leaving to go lay in my soft.
soft bed,
Bored outta my mind,
once again,
Cant drift off into that sleeping bind,
still thinking i'm holding a pen,
It fell on the floor!
What's this?
I must ask once more,
it tis' something that's never occured to me
Never had i thought i'd see or have to smeel this!
Why! it is nothing more than mere puddle of fricken mouse piss!
will someone please clean this up!?
It will not be me,
for you see,
I will not use this precious hand of mine for something as vitle as this!
So please clean up the goddamn mouse piss!
I know this may be sick and weird,
but you know,
someone has to let someone else know that there's something this sincere!
just one little question,
to take the bet,
or you ok,
or you,
grossed yet?

Submitted on 2007-02-05 19:30:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is a stupid ass poem. ITs ausome

| Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by DrkRomeo_sGirl | [ Reply to This ]

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