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The Breath of Death

Author: babz9001
ASL Info:    15/ female/ Lloydminster
Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 0 /2 /10
Words: 162
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Wrote during the last v-ball tourney of the year. November 06/07

The Breath of Death

A mother of two receives a call
That made her lean hard on the wall.
Her legs turned numb and very weak,
Tears in her eyes, and about to leak.

Her husband, and a father of two,
Also a soldier that still was new.
He turned around to help someone
Only thinking, this guy has a son.

While helping out he was shot in the back,
Courage, a thing he never will lack.
For he still helped this wounded guy,
Even though he knew he would die.

He sent the injured man on his way,
And he himself offered to stay.
His blood poured out onto the ground.
He closed his eyes and lay on a mound.

He wished his friends and family well,
And prays his soul away from Hell.
He lived on for only one short breath,
Then slowly was taken away by death.

By: Tiffany McKenzie

Submitted on 2007-02-05 21:31:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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