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    dots Submission Name: Lost lettersdots
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    Author: blue_pixie_dust
    ASL Info:    16 female
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 42/36/22
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 274
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 694



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    dotsLost lettersdots
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    Lost letters in the bottom
    of a long forgotten chest
    Lay coldly on the ocean's floor.
    Sleepily and silently waiting
    For the day they gains back the pleasure
    It once gave to a loved one.

    Silent whispers of love
    and of memories from long ago
    seep into the hand- written pages.
    Many secrets have been told
    in these letters
    And none have been retold.

    How she longs to regain
    the pleasure she once had
    when reading those letters.
    A whisper in the wind they are
    and yet she still remembers
    the lost letters in the bottom
    of that long forgotten chest.




    Submitted on 2007-02-06 18:19:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked the thoughts of this. Lost letters could be so much. As I was reading this, I was thinking they were from a lover, but it can also be seen in a whole other way. This really wanted me to want another line or something because it was so good. I am adding this to my favorites. Keep up the great work!

    ~Meagan
    | Posted on 2007-02-24 00:00:00 | by the_truth | [ Reply to This ]
      Line 4 - Did you mean "Sleepily"? Lines 5 & 6 - maybe "they" would refer back to the letters rather than "it"? Or maybe you wish to refer back to the chest?

    I liked the idea behind this poem. Lost letters could certainly have their own stories to tell! There's really lots of potential in this poem. It almost reminded me of the Titanic when I read the line, "Lay coldly on the ocean's floor." You left me wanting more! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-02-08 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]



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