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Author: PiperH
ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia
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Words: 25
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I got the inspiration from a show called Charmed. Prue watched her younger sister die. As soon as the words "I love you" are uttered from Piper's mouth, her head falls back and her eyes are fixed into a permanent position. Hence, "Her eyes don't see".
and Prue doesn't want this to happen of course, and she doesn't want to cry over losing her sister. the doctors are moving around her and talking, but time stands still and all she can see is her sister. all she can think about it how Piper is gone...
Well, that's how I see it. So this is a really, really simple poem.


Looking up
time stands still
silent tears
come unwilled

the hour glass breaks
her eyes don't see
stuck in one place
staring at me

Submitted on 2007-02-07 16:55:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  simple and beautiful. i love it.
| Posted on 2007-02-09 00:00:00 | by blankscreen | [ Reply to This ]

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