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    dots Submission Name: The Definition of Depressiondots
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    Author: emo-tastic
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Definition of Depressiondots
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    ask only for another season
    they told me nonchalantly over a cup of coffee
    (my fourth cup of the day---
    more than I can handle
    but I am
    invincible.)

    I search for the definition of depression
    and conclude that my unhappiness is nothing

    disorder/disorder/disorder
    the colloquial mess that I call a mantra.

    prepare for the fall and anticipate no summer
    break up the monotony of expectation
    and keep your gloves nearby.




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      For some reason, I'm drawn to depression poems. I think it's because I deal with depression myself, and I console myself with the thought that there are other people suffering the same way I am. Whatever the case may be, I love this piece. It seems to describe depression completely and accurately. Keep it up!
    | Posted on 2007-02-08 00:00:00 | by black_beauty18 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi this was good i no and have had this in my life and family for many years i like your version
    if i get brave enough i will post mine called scarecrow

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    | Posted on 2007-02-08 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      prepare for the fall and anticipate no summer
    break up the monotony of expectation
    and keep your gloves nearby.

    this is a stunning way to end.
    something about depression and gloves works for me. i was just talking yesterday about when i was majorly depressed and hospitalised a few years back and im sitting there thinking if only i hadnt have insisted on throwing my gloves away perhaps i would have beaten it faster but no...

    i think what comes through this last stanza for me is more about how when you have a good day you just expect tomorrow is gonna be HIDEOUS... i always liked it when it wasnt so but yes... always keep the gloves nearby just in case.

    i like the coffee and the invincible parenthesis...
    disorder./disorder/disorder is a new way to present an idea which i liked very much and may have to have a fiddle with sometime in my own writings.

    i saw your name and decided i havent seen you round in ages... have you been gone or have i been blind?
    | Posted on 2007-02-07 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      prepare for the fall and anticipate no summer
    break up the monotony of expectation
    and keep your gloves nearby.

    this is a stunning way to end.
    something about depression and gloves works for me. i was just talking yesterday about when i was majorly depressed and hospitalised a few years back and im sitting there thinking if only i hadnt have insisted on throwing my gloves away perhaps i would have beaten it faster but no...

    i think what comes through this last stanza for me is more about how when you have a good day you just expect tomorrow is gonna be HIDEOUS... i always liked it when it wasnt so but yes... always keep the gloves nearby just in case.

    i like the coffee and the invincible parenthesis...
    disorder./disorder/disorder is a new way to present an idea which i liked very much and may have to have a fiddle with sometime in my own writings.

    i saw your name and decided i havent seen you round in ages... have you been gone or have i been blind?
    | Posted on 2007-02-07 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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