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Leave you to die..

Author: Black-Death
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Leave you to die..

What we have to do... is cut her open...
Make her bleed...
See what makes her run...
What is in her blood...
No... She has no blood..
Shes a vampire...
She feeds off of your love...
Sucking you dry...
Leaving you there to die...

Submitted on 2007-02-08 01:02:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Nice oncemore you have mastered a great poem. i love all the death. thats kind of my line of poetry. Great poem though. keep up the great work.
| Posted on 2007-02-08 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]

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