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As the school bell rang...

Author: Black-Death
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As the school bell rang...

As the school bell rang...
As the blood driped from my face...
Mixed with tears...
as i looked up...
All i could hear... is hes not breathing...
i saw there face... pail....
i could see the tears fall... Crashing down...
i could feel the emptyness falling around me...
Blackness starting to over come...
Wrap me...
Giving me warmpth...
As i lay here....

Submitted on 2007-02-08 01:02:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Yes i loved your poem. its like a school killing right. ah i know the feeling many a time have i wanted to just kill them all. But life goes on and eventually gets better. at least thats what i have to tell myself to sleep at night. LOL. Anyways nice sentence structure. Great poem keep up the good work.

| Posted on 2007-02-08 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]

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