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    dots Submission Name: Beloveddots
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    Author: andthebandgoes
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 12/16/11
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       I thought I was being clever.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsBeloveddots
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    Useless
    Situated next to four bigger, stronger replicas
    Your existence is purely aesthetic
    Yet, you remain the favorite
    Oh, my pinky toe




    Submitted on 2007-02-08 20:48:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha! So Chell isn't the only one with a sense of humor around here. I'll have to refer her in this direction.

    Definitely not what I was expecting, but hey--it's Friday. I needed a laugh.

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2007-02-09 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]


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