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    dots Submission Name: Tangerince Diplomacydots
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    Author: andthebandgoes
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 12/16/11
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Satire
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    state of the union.


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    There are apples and peaches in the refrigerator if you’re hungry and I think some raspberries in the bottom right drawer. Terrorists. This orange is amazing. Criminals. What about cheese there might some in the meat drawer like swiss or munster. Bio-diesel. That man in the red tie does not look happy maybe he has a gland problem or something. Strategic. Do you think she’s chewing gum or her tongue wouldn’t that hurt maybe that’s why she looks so sour. Justice.

    Melting pot.




    Submitted on 2007-02-08 21:03:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      (Insert pseudo-whistle here.) Laughing at the government--now that's bravado! I must remember to do that more often.

    ...Actually, biodiesel is a BAD alternative. I did a thesis paper on all this--businesses tell you there would be a decided effect on the economy because of a switchover? Do the math--IT'S A POSITIVE EFFECT.

    Thank you, George W. Bush--it's good to know we're all gonna die in a few years.

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2007-02-10 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      I like how it seems like you have mixed two very different poems together, but still made it work, even though I know it was intentional. This makes it even more thought provoking. I like how the different things from everyday life seem to fit perfectly with the more special one-word sentences, even though I had to read it more than once to be able to wrap my head around it.
    Great job, definitely a work worth keeping.

    Take Care,
    -Natalia
    | Posted on 2007-02-09 00:00:00 | by Natalia Petro | [ Reply to This ]


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