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    dots Submission Name: Ellipticaldots
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    Author: andthebandgoes
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 12/16/11
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I love shorts.


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    dotsEllipticaldots
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    What I know now
    is nothing more
    than a wordy retelling
    of what I knew before.




    Submitted on 2007-02-08 21:05:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very nice. I'll have to remember that one for a quote or something--sage words from a sixteen year old kid. (Before you start to think I'm being patronizing, I'm not that much older than you are. I happen to LIKE seeing other students thinking for a change.)

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2007-02-10 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]


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