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    dots Submission Name: In the land of shattered dreamsdots
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    Author: anna kareinina
    ASL Info:    16 f india
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 20/28/22
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsIn the land of shattered dreamsdots
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    Lovely life how i loved thee
    never wanted O heart to part with thee..
    then came a silent tresspasser...
    with some silent hymns under his breath..
    i lost all and still in delight..
    I am wandering In the Land of wonders..
    Trapped in my own land of dreams!!
    chains so soft,yet so firm..
    i dont know how he binds me...
    Life on a high for sure i know..
    and then will follow deep ravines..
    where hopes,dreams and i will fall
    in the Land of Shattered Dreams!!




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