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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: Amanda Lynn
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 332/193/56
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       still working on this...title and such

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    I come to you on silver wings
    with babies breath
    and ivy rings

    I come to you on a cloud of dreams
    where angels tread
    and the sunshine beams

    I come to you under the glow of the moon
    dancing with the fireflies
    playing a gentle tune

    I come to you at the rainbows end
    with delightful colors
    that nature lends

    I come to you in perfect peace
    a gentle sigh
    a sweet release

    I leave you in rapture
    nirvana, sublime
    a perfect ending for a love like mine

    Submitted on 2007-02-09 14:11:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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