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    Author: Amanda Lynn
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 332/193/56
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I come to you on silver wings
    with babies breath
    and ivy rings

    I come to you on a cloud of dreams
    where angels tread
    and the sunshine beams

    I come to you under the glow of the moon
    dancing with the fireflies
    playing a gentle tune

    I come to you at the rainbows end
    with delightful colors
    that nature lends

    I come to you in perfect peace
    a gentle sigh
    a sweet release

    I leave you in rapture
    nirvana, sublime
    a perfect ending for a love like mine




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