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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1335
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    Description:
       part 2 of the chaos theory


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    dotsConsequences dots
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    The elements of the chaos theory
    Falling apart
    And yet held together
    By some unseen power

    Everyone makes the choice
    Even if…
    They are not prepared
    To pay the consequences

    We all understand
    But choose not to act
    Act, for what’s right
    Even with the consequences




    Submitted on 2007-02-09 17:12:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a really great poem. I understand what you're talking about because knowledge understanding and action usually don't equate. This is a really well written work that shows effectively the point you're trying to make. keep up the good work.

    - kathleen
    | Posted on 2007-02-11 00:00:00 | by kathleenbrennan | [ Reply to This ]


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