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    dots Submission Name: Ateadots
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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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       this is kinda a riddle if you can solve it then yo are amazing. if you think you did please pm me asap! lol


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    dotsAteadots
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    I am fourth wind. My birth name is atea(at-tea-a) I come from no place that has a name. I know my fate, of a kind none has had. The world revolves around the sun and it to me. I speak in riddles for the truth is tainted on earth. Far from the moon I search for the bottle containing lies for the pride of good. Truth tell evilís, for lies tell truth and truth be good. So earth around sun and it to me. Moon lies producing truth. On the beginning of the middle the story unfolds for my mother is the second of five while being the oldest




    Submitted on 2007-02-09 17:25:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this but I cant figure it out.. that is realy good.. usually I can figure out riddles pritty easy. but yours I dont have a clue....
    Amanda (candy)
    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by allmine | [ Reply to This ]


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