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    dots Submission Name: Loch ness Monsterdots

    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
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       Just messin around it.s ment to be kinda off funny if you knew what the rap thang is all about u should gets this so yea jsut comment


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    dotsLoch ness Monsterdots

    listen!!! listen!!! listen!!!
    yea!!! yea!!! yeah!!!

    Im like the loch ness monster in dis game
    in the hood u don't see me,
    but u hear story about me.

    This is a lyrical contest
    U know who da best
    tell ur fat ass bitch sit done an take a rest.
    I told u already,
    That im da best
    I anin't no bitch like 50 cent
    so I don't need a bullet proof vest!!

    So I hence what i'm saying
    Always hear u complaning
    Da words dat i'm Spiting is like a damn blizzard
    I can catch a cold in da dezert
    Eat ur girl out like fresh dezzert
    In ur hood Iím camouflaged like a damn lizard

    I know what cha thinking
    This shit is wack
    But yeah
    It might be the worst rhyme that I spit
    but still at the end of the night
    who still fucking ur bitch!!!!!!
    While ur home all alone giving dome to da pope
    U never knew that your bitch hooker name was "Hope"
    Blessing the whole squad for just a dollar.
    Sent her on my way, But I told her to stop and gave my boyz a hollar
    At the end of the night,
    she made a pretty dollar.

    Three weeks from now
    don't come to me and saying dat im the father
    there is 40 some posibility 'n not including da inner city

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