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    dots Submission Name: teach me how to write againdots
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    Author: waffuru
    Elite Ratio:    3.93 - 12/23/8
    Words: 707
    Class/Type: Prose/
    Total Views: 754
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Description:
       These are all seperate things interconnected by one thread; you.


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    i see your face in my hourglass again
    crossing mountains in the freezing stone
    time could never be measured in pounds
    pounds of love
    pounds of longing
    the sound of magnetic trains
    your sand castle never washed away
    one stone skips across our sky
    across our eyes
    i follow your shadow everywhere i go
    cherry blossom
    scarecrow
    this taste of wine, this taste of
    mine
    I'd unwrite all these pages
    remove their words from our languages
    to trust would mean to find and
    to help would be just fine
    a robins egg, your silky skin



    i was born a figher, you were born
    a giver. so give yourself to me.
    smoke covers this room, lights that
    never work will light your path
    straight across this sea
    mountains between
    i watched you take a bath.
    you took great pleasure in control
    waves of silver across my love
    your words always ripple through me
    helped me do my laundry
    i hear you washing dishes, wishing
    sounds of your silent sigh
    you're making promises you can't keep
    keep the snakes away and i'll be yours
    i'll be yours
    under steel tipped lies
    steal away to lie in bed
    we never get to love
    love the heart and love the soul


    belief in something sacred
    the time of day or your brand new locket
    the picture of solids
    why did you mail that letter?
    the ink on my pages runs together
    words become phrases and i never knew
    you always knew
    something great, something luminescent
    you'll glow, she said
    these stars would be jealous
    the lightbulb burned out again
    we're always
    burned out again
    i touch your face to see
    do you still say the same words in fire
    in water in earth
    the rocks won't make the moon
    we'll travel there someday you said
    planting cherry blossoms in the yard
    i always thought you were one of them
    brilliant and true
    the more i love you the more they'll grow
    that's what you told me, everyday you'd say
    the gravity of our distances



    I can not choose but to say, who would live if you were stone?
    Light shines through this wall, untouched by human eyes
    Candle light to light my way
    Tracing skin across the border, into places I dare not venture
    It was an adventure with you, outside the heart and inside the mind
    Through the nameless lands without our pencils
    I am a writer, you were always the writer
    Words that burn and sounds that blind
    You always turned the lights off
    I could not help but feel your skin, the warmth of a stone
    Our place between the bones, one more city lost
    I'd love to cook your dinner
    fill your eyes with sounds of longing
    here, or now
    I forget the names for feelings
    You only remember the scent of places, my father always liked you
    nothing will find you, wax drips from your fingertips
    Always curious about the impossible
    We were the bones of impossible



    I cannot leave, you speak softly into my ear
    A million miles upon my kitchen floor
    The taste of your smell
    The dreams about your face, scarlet and scared
    You think of bridges holding you back
    A sky who doesn't understand
    You paint for me, color so unreal
    trees and lakes
    The only things you've known
    I dreamt you were a tree,
    The only thing you could ever be
    Skeletal limbs reach for words
    words like sentiment
    like trust
    I always trusted the space between words
    words like "a whisper"
    I see something I can't believe
    You never say I'll miss you



    I would never write like before
    that careful whirlwind of words
    twisted up and lost, you spoke into the sea
    'We' is something I never understood
    before your careful touch
    not like before your leading sentances
    stone carved statues without parole
    Nothing like the parade,
    I first met you.
    I've never met you.
    Your heart; a limited time offer
    They're going fast
    You speak to me in liquids, you always say
    nothing tangable.
    Nothing gained.
    I reach to touch your gaze,
    you always have to leave.
    These words will always sound like trees.




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