Description: I think that when people live, nobody really lives. We never take any chances, we are afraid of what people think. We depend on other's opinion, and nobody really sees anything around them.
Tell me what you think :]
living to live -------------------------------------------
Living for death is living for fear,
Living for fear is living for death.
While we live we never hear
The calling of Life, the shreaking of Death.
Living for life is living for freedom
Living for freedom is living for life.
Hearing the scent and tasting the rythm
No one will ever....from fear of Life.
I'm not so fond of the repetition, but that's a personal opinion. 'from fear of Life' should probably be 'for fear of life' in order to conform with your other sentences. Also, 'shreaking' should be 'shrieking.'
wonderful format, short simple, thats the way i like it, i hate it when i have to read forever to get the point.(dont care if it is long as point is ovoius). many propts
Submission Name: living to live
