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    dots Submission Name: Memoriesdots

    Author: burningover_out
    ASL Info:    19.Female.NJ
    Elite Ratio:    4.52 - 19/15/6
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 546
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       I've been having a lot of things going through my mind latly, ehh. I really like this =] Tell me what you think...<3

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    Lingering Moments
    Hypnotizing, Captivating, Depressing
    Delaying time, envisioning happiness

    Submitted on 2007-02-10 15:42:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      To me this is a short list of feelings going through a confused mind, in this case trying to recall memories. In that sense, this certainly is a success.
    | Posted on 2007-02-10 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this too... it uses every word one could possibly use to describe a memory... and it's short and sweet, always nice. Keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2007-02-10 00:00:00 | by black_beauty18 | [ Reply to This ]

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