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    dots Submission Name: These Feelingsdots
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    Author: black- tears
    ASL Info:    14/f/Ontario Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 5/4/17
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Rant/Trapped
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    Bytes: 616



    Description:
       goin through a hard time ..


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    dotsThese Feelingsdots
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    This feeling is sickening.
    My blood running cold,
    my soul running scared.

    I dont know why this is happening.
    I thought things were good again,
    but I had to go and fuck up again.
    My last chance and I lost it.

    I try to hold on but my strength is gone,
    everything effects me.

    I want freedom,
    I want happiness,
    I want to be trusted but I wont let myself.
    I cant control myself anymore.

    Im trapped here, suffocating with no escape.
    What will happen next?
    Only time will tell.




    Submitted on 2007-02-11 15:11:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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