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    dots Submission Name: Spitting Blooddots
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    Author: Aj
    ASL Info:    21/M/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 102/110/29
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 1036
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 872



    Description:
       I hate when friends talk shit. I hate when people assumer they know who I am. I hate when people don't give other people a chance to change they only judge them by the mistakes they've made.


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    you've taken the words right out of my mouth
    just to see how quick the word gets around
    this is entertainment you don't have muuch else
    than a talent for drama, that's what you're all about

    there's never a chance to explain my point of view
    my words turn to stone as I attempt to tell the truth
    you have no idea about the things i've been through
    everything I have to gain outwieghs the things i lose

    I reach to find my voice and you silence my attempt
    every chance that I miss leaves me tasting regret
    what more can I give, what more could you expect
    an expression is worth a thousand words
    so tell me what I meant

    and it seems to me that i'll never get ahead
    living in the ashes of the words I never said.




    Submitted on 2007-02-11 18:06:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really liked this poem. Its something that most everyone goes through, at least I'm going through it, and I know some others. The last line in the last stanza doesn't really make much sense to me, though. I guess it tied in with the title, though. Overall, it was a great poem, and it's going on my favorites!
    | Posted on 2007-02-11 00:00:00 | by xcut_up_angelx | [ Reply to This ]


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