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Each day...


Author: Black-Death
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Each day...



Each day...
You bring me to tears...
You cut me open...
Watch me bleed...
Each week...
you make me
love you...
Cry your name...
Want to hold you again...
each month...
you...
kill my insides...
watch me die...
Each year...
you.....
you....
...




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