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This is a gift to denny... Much love hun

Author: Black-Death
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This is a gift to denny... Much love hun

As... we lay here.. me and you...
As... we cuddle... with you..
As... are hearts beat.. together...
As we grew old... together..
.. we still lay here... me and you..
we still cuddle... with you...
and are hearts still beat... together...
As we lay becide each other... holding hands...
laying here... in thease beds..
as are hearts.. slowly stoped...
As we lay here.. me and you...
in heaven

Submitted on 2007-02-11 23:16:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  how sweet. i like the format. very original. tieing it to the passage of time and on into death was a nice touch.

"and are hearts still beat... together..."

i really like that line is such a universal theme but it still works
| Posted on 2007-02-12 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]

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