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    dots Submission Name: Love's actions / My love dots
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    Author: anooplokur
    ASL Info:    21/male/india
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 73/106/34
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 167
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1150



    Description:
       i love this poem with all of my heart and i love the person who wrote this as well you are very speacial and you shall always be..


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    dotsLove's actions / My love dots
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    ok before you read this poem i want u all to know it was not written by me it was written by a beautiful person who is shy to put it out on the net coz of the comments that it mite recieve but i want to share this poem now and make that person realise what a talented poet she is and how good she can write love poems i hope u all enjoy it and if u dont then **** off lol j.k



    Walk across loneliness
    Find a beautiful reflection
    Of two entwined hearts
    Balancing on gentle waves
    Of committed emotions



    Light Love's candle
    Turn the shade to past
    And walk on roads
    Of hopes and dreams



    Catch a raindrop
    Gaze into its pureness
    Turn winter to spring
    Clouds to blue skies
    A beat to a melody
    The melody of love
    Our love …



    Your words live
    In each thought
    Your silent laugh is
    The tune of my life
    Your love's haven
    Is all of my veins
    And for that you are:
    My love …




    Submitted on 2007-02-12 07:54:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      loved this piece. it describes the height of love in all sweetness. this is a well written poem. and i agree with bobby k, give us more

    kat
    | Posted on 2007-02-12 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty cool poem, Give us more.

    Bobby K
    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2007-02-12 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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