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    dots Submission Name: Ramblings About Lovedots
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    Author: Emo Angel
    ASL Info:    15/f/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 17/26/24
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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       I just got bored one day in Biology & the questions just came forth.


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    dotsRamblings About Lovedots
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    When you fall in love with someone
    you don't fall out.
    When you havve a crush on someone
    you merely step in it.
    If you don't like it
    You can just wipe it off & keep on going.
    Some say that you can only fall in love once
    but,
    what if that's not true?
    What if you can fall in love more than once?
    How do you do that?
    Do you fall in it & eventually get back up
    & just wipe it off?
    After you wipe it off & then fall in it again somewhere else
    don't you look like an idiot?
    Can you fall in love with more than one at a time?
    How would you do that?
    It seems....impossible.
    Why do we even say you "fall in love"?
    How can you fall in love?
    Think about it,
    love is an emotion
    not a puddle or something like that.
    Same thing with "making love".
    How do you make love?
    Love is always there you
    you just have to find it.
    Why would they even call that making love?
    You can do that without loving.
    Just like you can tell someone you love them
    & not mean it.
    How do you even know
    if you love someone?
    It's all so confusing.
    How, why, when, where, who
    will we fall in love with?
    How, why, when, where, who
    will we trip in love?
    How, why, when, where, who
    will we step in love?
    No one knows until you do.
    But,
    what if we never do?
    Could that be possible?
    I don't think so.
    Someone's bound to be as confused as you
    & stumble into your puddle.




    Submitted on 2007-02-12 09:36:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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