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Revised Version (Even Angels Die)

Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
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Words: 183
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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i'm sorry life but i can't play your game anymore

Revised Version (Even Angels Die)

i am the angel who's wings were torn from my body. Blood from countless battles streams from my heart and down onto the floor. i'm done now. I fought for long enough even though i didn't win in the end its was always all for you .

even angels die...

whats worth it, now I that lost you. my one and only friend you made me happy before. but i can't seem ignore that you broke me and i... miss you.

im sorry for trying

but i sit here in this cold room

crying, screaming, venting, and slicing

you'll never understand

why even angels die

yeah i know even angels die...

i'm so sorry, but what am i worth to you when i can't even fly anymore...

im so damn sorry for trying

but you'll never understand

why i'm crying, screaming, regreting, and slicing

even angels die

believe me girl, even angels die...

...what am I worth to you?

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