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    dots Submission Name: Migrainedots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 934
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 723



    Description:
       I didnt go to school today. I have a freaking migraine. It sucks. For all of you who have chronic migraines , you know how I feel.


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    dotsMigrainedots
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    Eyes blurred
    Head confused
    Oh sweet sleep,
    I'm so amused.

    This chronic illness
    I live with everyday,
    It comes back again and again,
    But it does'nt always stay.

    Darkness, no light,
    Do what I can to survive the fight.
    Pop pills, turn up a bottle, floor the throttle.

    This illness has some hold on me.
    Fuck you,
    Just let me be.

    I guess I'm paying a price,
    Oh glorious world, your so nice.

    I bawl and bawl wishing it would
    Stop
    And go away

    All I can here and all I can say
    Is that I have a fucking
    MIGRAINE!




    Submitted on 2007-02-13 09:51:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hahaha...
    no wait i must use caps for this
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
    THAT MY FRIEND WAS GLORIOUS
    CONGRAGULATIONS
    BUT YOU MISPELLED "HEAR"
    ON THE LAST STANZA
    KEEP WRITING
    I LOVE YOU MWAH!!!!!
    ~grace~
    | Posted on 2007-02-16 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it alot. Very creative. Migranes are indeed a horrible thing.
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]


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