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    dots Submission Name: Sunset Sunrise - Haikudots
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    Author: JAcksonJr
    ASL Info:    20/Male/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 56/116/57
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    dotsSunset Sunrise - Haikudots
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    The sunset arrives
    We say our goodbyes once more
    Tomorrow awaits

    The sunrise arrives
    Starting new days together
    Walking unknown paths




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