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    dots Submission Name: The 'ism' of Racedots
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    Author: itsjustme22
    ASL Info:    19/f/CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 237/114/38
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 169
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    Description:
       don't be a silent witness.


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    dotsThe 'ism' of Racedots
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    This apathy leaves us lethargic;
    unable to create change.
    This silence encourages us to
    keep the world in this state of
    hatred and craze,
    making us raise our kids
    to maintain the ignorance, and
    "There Ain't No Way You Could Discriminate,"
    but it's all the same cuz,
    our fate's remains
    lie with our materialized pain;
    And it's funny how still no one will explain
    how everyone can complain about

    Our world that won't change.




    Submitted on 2007-02-13 22:57:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A very true peice. I like that you write about real issues. Its brave of you and I admire this about you. Good for you.

    There is nothing wrong with this piece. However, if you could put some art and imagery into it, I think it could have an even more outstanding effect.

    Still, very well done.
    | Posted on 2007-07-17 00:00:00 | by leftof_red | [ Reply to This ]
      good job, standing up for what's right is important! i hope to be an activist when i am older for a bunch of people's rights (gay, race, sex). joe strummer is one of my heroes and musical/life inspirations. are you a fan of the clash or any of strummer's projects? there is a great biography about him too.
    | Posted on 2007-07-04 00:00:00 | by freddybuzzkill | [ Reply to This ]
      Finally someone speaks up about racism? The day my pen writes normally I shall endeavour to write about these things.

    "There Ain't No Way You Could Discriminate,"

    That just sums up this piece. Keep writing.
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      i know this might sound completely lame but ur poem is awesome...and i feel like its true... keep writing more like that one
    lonely
    | Posted on 2007-02-14 00:00:00 | by lonelybug | [ Reply to This ]



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