wow. this has its own credibility in the fact that our reactions to almost anything are fueled by a chemical reaction within our bodies.... kind of like when stress takes its course and can actually change your attitudes, your looks, etc... this piece is really good and very short... nice to see your style again... been away too long... not much time to spend here but I try
The chemical reaction is not an analogy or a metaphor or anything like that. It's a fickin' fact of nature. All you flower thumpers give me a chemical reaction that fills me with anger, sadness and disdain.
You know I understand this feeling, and I think the chemical reaction is a good analogy, because at that moment when it hits you, your face heats up, maybe in anger or rage, maybe in embarassment for feeling so stupid to ever have believed. It's the old fight or flight beastial emotion, and it is very much a chemical reaction.
what are these people saying...expand...nono..its just right..perfect ...i red the poem that inspired this one just so i knew where you were coming from when you wrote this..you were able toexplain somuch in four lines and thats why its perfect...smiles ange
First of all, thanks for the comments on "unpolished apathy"-- I'm glad it inspired you to write this!
I like this... it brings the emotional world in touch with the reality. It's... I don't know. I can't get my thoughts into words, but it's really good. Like Leahrah said, quite a sweet little ditty. :)