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    dots Submission Name: hipocritical christiansdots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       just got to thinking and got a bit pissed...i might add more to this some other time...might.


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    all these damn damn christians are all hypocrits!
    all you ever hear them say is "oh theyre going to hell over this and that" yet the fuckin bible itself says that if you even talk of someone going to hell or damning them the fucking less the you condemn your fucking self to fucking hell!
    am i right?
    to top it off these fuckers call themselves all followers of christ....well jesus was one of those fuckers that never judged anybody, christians...no the whole fuckin church fuckin judges everybody all the fuckin time! not once do they not take a fuckin break.

    well, i'm glad i got that off my chest.
    -THieF




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      Hahaha I see what you mean dude. Don't fret I've had my fair share of war. It is true that not every christian is a piece of sh.it but through much study it is despicable how the religion has come to power and became a dominant force in the world. No wonder we have so many social ills and injustices to fight. Well the important thing is that you are on the right path all I ask is to know your enemy. Learn, grow, and become someone sucessful. A full and happy life is the ONLY way to combat those who you oppose. Fight the good fight my friend.

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    | Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by fryte | [ Reply to This ]
      Yo dude this write is so farkin true, excellent,
    but agreeing with Ani; im a christian and i don;t fit this stereo type but hey i totally feel your frustration.
    | Posted on 2007-02-14 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      NO THEY ARE NOT ALL HYPOCRITS, NOW YOU ARE STEREOTYPING..THERE IS GOOD CHRISTIANS THEN THE FAKE CHRISTIANS. I'M A [censored]IN CHRISTIAN BUT I HAVE A MIND OF MY OWN AND I DONT BELIEVE EVERYTHING THE BIBLE SAYS..WHETHER ITS ALL TRUE OR NOT, I HAVE MY OWN CHOICE WHY I BELIEVE IN IT OR NOT AND YOUR SITTING THERE AND NAMING JESUS AS "THOSE [censored]ERS" YOU HAVE NO LIFE..YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOUR SAYING AND KEEP YOUR STUPID COMMENTS AND CRITICS TO YOURSELF

    IM SURE YOU'VE BEEN A HYPOCRIT IN YOUR LIFE ATLEAST ONCE..LOOK IN THE MIRROR
    | Posted on 2007-02-14 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]


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