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    dots Submission Name: To Sleep Alongside A Glacierdots
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    Author: FarawayFeelings
    ASL Info:    16/F/Mia
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 159/74/72
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 820
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsTo Sleep Alongside A Glacierdots
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    One by one they,
    tread carefully,
    on ice of unknown density,
    the cold seaps and seethes,
    but he persists,
    pushes through walls of solid cold,
    but most if not all regret,
    having stepped,
    only one more further,
    and fallen through the ice,
    he will look back,
    and regret having frozen to death.




    Submitted on 2007-02-14 19:10:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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