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    dots Submission Name: I Braved Something Miscommunicateddots
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    Author: FarawayFeelings
    ASL Info:    16/F/Mia
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 159/74/72
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI Braved Something Miscommunicateddots
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    I sat alabaster and resilient,
    my shoulders hastily proud,
    the cool setting,
    left only my determination.

    I weathered bouts of hopelessness,
    and rooms full of indifferent people,
    I braved,
    a glow all my own.

    Oh how resilient I was!
    and circumstance considered,
    things could have been
    much worse.

    I was strong,
    and my curves silently boasting,
    I was resilient!
    Resilient
    as the surface of any urn.




    Submitted on 2007-02-14 19:15:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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